Flash Fiction Par Deux- November 17, 2010

I just realized that not only had I not posted the part 2 Flash Fiction on Facebook Private Message, I also did not follow through. Only Miki and I wrote something... however, I'm not sure how it ended. My memory is failing me. I am copying what I have on it before Facebook deletes private messages in the future.

November 17, 2010

Josie Briones Borlongan

• Flash Fiction- Par Deux
  OK, here's the next round. Same rules...only up to 400 words.
  
  Start with: " Someone's knocking on the door."
  End with: "All I could do was close my eyes."
  
  
  Mickey Briones- 11/18/2010

  • Someones knocking on the door. It was 2am and i was lying on my bed half asleep feeling so cold because the snow is starting to fall that time. I immediately went out of bed to see who's knockin. I opened the door slowly and then i saw my bestfriend Tomas trying to hide his right hand at his back and looking at me furiosly. I asked him what brought him here that time. Then he told me: PAPATAYIN KITA!! And suddenly he stabbed me with a knife and left me bleeding to death. I was so shocked that time not because of what he did but because of what he said. It's a tagalog word and i am in the Philippines. Why the hell there's winter??. All i could do was close my eyes..Ü
    Josie Briones Borlongan - 11/18/2010

    • Wow Miki, I am so pleasantly surprised...you are such a creative writer. You have a very good imagination. Hmmm...you are inspiring me to award a prize this go around again. 
      
      Keep it coming...you can write more. 
      Mickey Briones- 11/18/2010

      • Waaaah!! Nagustuhan nyo po? Not kidding? Yan n lng ata ang kaya q. Hehe. Sa fon lng kc aq ngffb kya hnd aq nkpgsend dti. Tnx 4 appreciating. Love lots.
        Josie Briones Borlongan - 11/18/2010

        • Oo naman. Ganda nga eh. Yan ang gusto ko...ilabas ang creative side ninyo 
          
          
          
          
          Josie Briones Borlongan - 11/20/2010
          Someone's knocking on the door.
          
          I am hesitating whether to open the door or not. I know who it is and why he is here. He has come for me.
          
          Love, as they say, knows no boundary. I fell in love, that's what this is all about. Am I ready to elope and be with him forever…to commit my life to him and leave my family and friends behind? For days, I have thought about it. I truly love him, there's no doubt in my heart and mind.
          
          Our whirlwind romance started almost a year ago. It was not love at first sight. It took us three encounters before something deep inside of me said he is the one. He later told me, he hated me at first, because seeing me brought back an uncontrollable urge that he was trying to fight. I thought when he said this that he may have had a bad experience from his past relationships, but then he said that I am his true love. I believed him. So, we both succumbed to our feelings and started seeing each other more often.
          
          We were having so much fun when we are together. He took me to places I have never been before. Although, at times, I felt in danger, somehow I love the feeling of the adrenalin rushing through my veins. Often, we meet at dusk and he takes me home right before dawn. This went on for months, until recently, I noticed him gradually changing. I have been seeing less of him. My heart longed for him so much.
          
          Last night, as I lay in bed half asleep, he knocked on my window. I asked him what was wrong. He said he just came to say goodbye… he’s leaving for good because it is no longer safe to be with me. I begged him not to leave and told him to take me with him.
          Finally, after seeing how much my heart is breaking, he whispered into my ears how we can be together forever. Then, he said—“Tomorrow, at dusk, I shall be coming for you.”
          
          Now, as I turn the doorknob, I no longer hesitate. Finally, I opened the door and into his arms, I cling, while he raises his cape and opens his mouth—I could feel his sharp fangs on my neck.
          
          All I could do was close my eyes.